Anthony I really appreciate the u-tube files, but I think you also need to create the diagrams and post them in JPGs. You will have on-line reviewers that might not be able to access the information
Hello Mr. Clemente. My name is Eugenio dos Santos and I will be one of your on-line reviewers for this class.
I think video as a medium to present these analysis is a very interesting choice. The result is very good and immediate to the viewers. Clear and well thought. However, as Prof. Dikigoropoulou states in her comment, you should present the same information in a "static" medium (images). Other reviewers might not be able to access the information presented in the videos. It is nonetheless a good idea that could benefit your presentation to class and teacher(s). The analysis is generally correct, but I would have represent it differently in some cases (for example, in Camelot Theatre, in Plan´s lower left corner I would not chanfer the rectangle. It's void in the ground floor but closed in the floor above it. I would also add what I think is a staircase in the left side of the plan.). As for the color schemes and format, as well as transitions, I think they are very good. Keep up the good work.
Kudos on the video files. I think they will bring a nice change of presentation style in the future. Your analysis is generally good, although, in some cases you will need to use colors or another way to differentiate elements from the overall composition; for clarity sake.
Thanks for the compliments on my presentation approach. I will soon be posting static images for all videos. I will look back on some of the case studies especially the example you referenced, and see how I can better represent it.
Anthony I really appreciate the u-tube files,
ReplyDeletebut I think you also need to create the diagrams and post them in JPGs. You will have on-line reviewers that might not be able to access the information
Hello Mr. Clemente.
ReplyDeleteMy name is Eugenio dos Santos and I will be one of your on-line reviewers for this class.
I think video as a medium to present these analysis is a very interesting choice. The result is very good and immediate to the viewers. Clear and well thought.
However, as Prof. Dikigoropoulou states in her comment, you should present the same information in a "static" medium (images). Other reviewers might not be able to access the information presented in the videos.
It is nonetheless a good idea that could benefit your presentation to class and teacher(s).
The analysis is generally correct, but I would have represent it differently in some cases (for example, in Camelot Theatre, in Plan´s lower left corner I would not chanfer the rectangle. It's void in the ground floor but closed in the floor above it. I would also add what I think is a staircase in the left side of the plan.). As for the color schemes and format, as well as transitions, I think they are very good.
Keep up the good work.
Anthony,
ReplyDeleteKudos on the video files. I think they will bring a nice change of presentation style in the future. Your analysis is generally good, although, in some cases you will need to use colors or another way to differentiate elements from the overall composition; for clarity sake.
Eugenio dos Santos,
ReplyDeleteThanks for the compliments on my presentation approach. I will soon be posting static images for all videos. I will look back on some of the case studies especially the example you referenced, and see how I can better represent it.