The presentation of your case studies is not very good. Composition wise it's not satisfactory. It seems cluttered. The lettering is also an unfortunate choice. I'm glad you improved in the videos on all aspects. Please be aware of all these aspects in your future presentations/posts.
Note: regarding the blog I would change the font in the texts and comment boxes. It's barely readable.
You need to separate your case studies. Also, I would suggest to not limit yourself to a particular theater layout, unless that is a critical part of your design; which will have to be justified.
The presentation of your case studies is not very good. Composition wise it's not satisfactory. It seems cluttered. The lettering is also an unfortunate choice. I'm glad you improved in the videos on all aspects.
ReplyDeletePlease be aware of all these aspects in your future presentations/posts.
Note: regarding the blog I would change the font in the texts and comment boxes. It's barely readable.
Anthony,
ReplyDeleteYou need to separate your case studies. Also, I would suggest to not limit yourself to a particular theater layout, unless that is a critical part of your design; which will have to be justified.
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